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Daniel Hettenbach's avatar

Beautiful and excellent and deep layered subtle transporting. You're a great Poet Ma'am.

Michael Drummond's avatar

What a delightful thought for the day~ I sure hope so Carolyn!

🌸 Carolyn Jones 🌸's avatar

Thanks Michael! 🌸

Richbee's avatar

Scalpels slip between seconds

Scratch the sun spots that

Rearrange the skin.

I remember a grave stone;

Scraped moss parchment

Reveled a name, date.

History unknown.

Reused, edited, redacted, blacked out document.

A new day arrives. Catch a ray of sun.

Doves coo, crows caw, chimes ring; Spring arrives.

I sweep time, last year leaves gone bye.

Birds return to refurbish old nest, lay eggs.

Palimpsest process: new material salvaged.

Holy amnesia rearranged

A new time recycles.

Diane's avatar

oh this is beautiful. I especially loved "a cartography of wounds and wonders,". Yup I get that.

And I love the bit in your intro about being "Like glitter you can’t quite suck out of the carpet of your nervous system" x

X. P. Callahan's avatar

“ . . . what if we are nothing more

than the afterimage

of what touched us”

Wenonah's avatar

I too am captured by the substance of Holy Amnesia. What a panacea for my thoughts today.

Portia's avatar

Carolyn, this is amazing.

Lev Raphael's avatar

This is so profound and I read it on a day when I've been pondering the long aftermath of being attacked by a dog last summer.

Favorite stanza: What if forgetting was not failure/but a holy amnesia,/the mind loosening its hoard/of bright shrapnel and ruin,/granting the body clemency.