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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Very melancholy and cinematic. You kind of know that this is a dream or state that won't last, no matter how perfect, how beautiful and right it is. You give subtle hints as to how it will end. But beautifully written and executed.

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

So lovely. The short lines feel so right for this poem.

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