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Cynthia's avatar

‘I remain here,

salt-bitten

hollow,

the taste of you

still on my lips—

a bitter,

saline ghost

of hope denied.’ 😞

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Luis A. Estable's avatar

I like how you wrote this to tell of a love escaping, running away from you or the speaker, a love that is running away or has done so. Good poetry!

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