I feel you slipping—
grains of you,
sliding,
p o u r i n g
through my fingers,
drifting toward a shore
I can never reach.
The water pulls back,
my feet stranded,
your love once lapping —
now a retreating tide,
a slow, silent theft.
I watch it go,
that gallant love
you once gave freely,
dragged
into the unreachable horizon,
a dim line where promises sink
like stones,
vanishing into the deep
unknown.
I remain here,
salt-bitten
hollow,
the taste of you
still on my lips—
a bitter,
saline ghost
of hope denied.
Thanks for reading! I appreciate it!
A huge ‘thank you’ to Duane for sharing his work with me, and igniting that creative spark.
Love and light 🌸🩷🌸
‘I remain here,
salt-bitten
hollow,
the taste of you
still on my lips—
a bitter,
saline ghost
of hope denied.’ 😞
I like how you wrote this to tell of a love escaping, running away from you or the speaker, a love that is running away or has done so. Good poetry!