What an eloquently beautiful piece Caz. Actually stirring many patterns of thought and emotion. For me.. this piece paints many a canvas; many a road for my imagination and thoughts to travel along, for me to gaze out of the window and drift away to a place where I can contemplate. x
‘I remain here,
salt-bitten
hollow,
the taste of you
still on my lips—
a bitter,
saline ghost
of hope denied.’ 😞
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I like how you wrote this to tell of a love escaping, running away from you or the speaker, a love that is running away or has done so. Good poetry!
Thank you! 🍁🧡🍁
What an eloquently beautiful piece Caz. Actually stirring many patterns of thought and emotion. For me.. this piece paints many a canvas; many a road for my imagination and thoughts to travel along, for me to gaze out of the window and drift away to a place where I can contemplate. x
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Dom!